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<h3><span style="color: #008000;"><strong><em>Cold</em> and <em>Long Dark</em></strong></span></h3>
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<li>Read the story <a href="http://crossedgenres.com/archives/012/cold-by-melissa-s-green/">&#8220;Cold&#8221;</a><br />
in <em>Crossed Genres</em> Issue #12</li>
<li style="text-align: left;">Read <a href="http://www.henkimaa.com/2010/01/15/shark-a-story-for-haiti/">&#8220;Shark&#8221;</a> right<br />
here at Henkimaa</li>
<li style="text-align: left;"><a href="http://www.henkimaa.com/category/field-of-words/cold/">More about <em>Cold</em></a></li>
<li style="text-align: left;"><a href="http://www.henkimaa.com/category/field-of-words/long-dark/">More about <em>Long Dark</em></a></li>
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<p><em>Consensus </em>as the form of government in my fiction came about from a combination of personal experience with consensus used in a collaborative project (in this case, Wikipedia) &amp; the influence of another science fiction story, Kim Stanley Robinson&#8217;s Mars trilogy (<em>Red Mars</em>, <em>Green Mars</em>, <em>Blue Mars</em>).  I&#8217;m doing a lot of reading nowadays about consensus, collaborative decisionmaking, sociocracy, etc. as background research for my writing.  I&#8217;m also becoming convinced that those forms of decisionmaking are our best means of recreating our own society &amp; government into one that really is <em>of, by, &amp; for the people</em>.</p>
<p>But for now: just the story of how I decided on <em>Consensus</em> to begin with.</p>
<h2><span style="color: #008000;">Storymind</span></h2>
<p>When I first decided to write <em>Cold </em>for NaNoWriMo 2007, I didn&#8217;t know much at all about the government or society in which my characters lived.  I only knew that the story began with a question — <em>What does cold feel like?</em> — out of which emerged the story&#8217;s setting &amp; first characters: a planet in the late stages of terraformation, and two young women, one who had never lived outside the enclosed habitats of her space-born society, &amp; one who had.  These two characters, Bai &amp; Boleyn, are the center of the story of <em>Cold</em>; but of course there is a world in which they live, a society in which they live, more questions to be answered.  For instance, how did Boleyn come to have experience outside the closed biosphere?  Okay, her family was exiled for a time to a remote facility.  But why?  How?  Where?  And so on.  Well, that&#8217;s storymaking, to me: it&#8217;s about asking a question, &amp; trying out answers until you come up with one that you like, which will generate more questions, more what ifs.</p>
<p>I made the decision to do NaNoWriMo 2007 in about February of that year.  But I had to constrain myself from actually writing it until November, when NaNo actually began.  Didn&#8217;t stop me from thinking about it, though; &amp; so what I call <em>storymind </em>became engaged pretty continually.  For instance, I remember walking across the UAA campus one day on a work-related errand. It must&#8217;ve been February or March, still winter, so I stuck that day to what we at UAA informally call the &#8220;spine&#8221; — the enclosed walkways that make it possible to walk most of the way across campus without going outside.  And I thought, hmm, wouldn&#8217;t the closed habitats on my story&#8217;s planet be build in a modular style, with closed in walkways like the ones I&#8217;m walking in now to connect them?  Why, of course they would. Thus in my storymind I began to design the structure of the enclosed community that I later named Turnbull, which is essentially a collection of several enclosed habitats called <em>Commons </em>that are connected together with &#8220;tubes&#8221; aboveground &amp; tunnels belowground.</p>
<p>(Turnbull itself is named after Margaret Turnbull, one of the two astronomers who compiled the <a id="nazr" title="Catalog of Nearby Habitable Systems (HabCat)" href="http://www.nasa.gov/vision/universe/newworlds/HabStars.html">Catalog of Nearby Habitable Systems (HabCat)</a> to narrow down the search for extraterrestrial intelligence (SETI), obviously useful in the search for systems with potentially habitable extrasolar planets like the one my characters were terraforming. The other HabCat compiler was Jill Tarter, who was the inspiration for the main character in Carl Sagan&#8217;s novel <em>Contact</em>, played in the movie by Jodie Foster.)</p>
<h2><span style="color: #008000;">The battle of the Battle of Washita River<br />
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<p><em>Cold </em>wasn&#8217;t all I was thinking about over the course of 2007.  Life stuff, of course, including a trip to Seattle &amp; Spokane to visit family.  Also, I got heavily involved in active editing of Wikipedia.  This began more-or-less by accident when I discovered that the Wikipedia article about the Dena&#8217;ina elder &amp; writer <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Peter_Kalifornsky">Peter Kalifornsky</a> indicated he was alive.  Hold on, I thought, didn&#8217;t I recall him having died sometime within the past few years?  Yep, about four years previously — so next thing I knew I was researching him, correcting the article, &amp; doing even more research&#8230; on an article which even now I haven&#8217;t completed (!!!).  But I sure learned a lot along the way about Dena&#8217;ina language, culture, &amp; history (Anchorage is situated in Dena&#8217;ina country) — some of which entered storymind to influence some aspects of <em>Cold</em>.  But of course I also got pulled to other Wikipedia articles, &amp; pretty soon Wikipedia editing became a major focus that largely drew me away from my writing life (at least in terms of writing <em>my </em>stuff) until November, when NaNoWriMo helped me to break that fixation.  Nowadays, I do Wikipedia editing only here &amp; there.  (Though it would really be nice if I finished that Peter Kalifornsky article!)</p>
<p>But my Wikipedia experience went into storymind too.  Of particular relevance: I got caught up in huge dispute on a particular article (the <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Battle_of_washita_river">Battle of Washita River</a>, if you want to know) with a certain editor with strong anti-Indian bigotry who wanted to paint the Cheyenne people in general &amp; the Cheyenne chief Black Kettle in particular as unqualifiedly evil, &amp; George Armstrong Custer (this editor&#8217;s personal hero) as unqualifiedly good &amp; wonderful &amp; perfect.  Never mind historical facts; &amp; never mind Wikipedia policies of <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:NPOV">neutral point of view</a> (commonly abbreviated in Wikipedia background discussions as NPOV), &#8220;<a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:NOR">no original research&#8221; (NOR)</a>, &amp; <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:VERIFY">verifiability</a> — policies that are intended to protect Wikipedia&#8217;s integrity as an encyclopedia by founding its articles on reliable sources, verifiable facts, &amp; neutral presentation of all sides of contentious issues instead of presenting only &#8220;one side of the story.&#8221;</p>
<div class="wp-caption alignnone" style="width: 510px"><a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Seventh_Cavalry_Charging_Black_Kettle_s_Village_1868.jpg"><img title="Battle of Washita River" src="http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4046/4345536130_c01419f197.jpg" alt="Battle of Washita River" width="500" height="282" /></a><p class="wp-caption-text">Battle of Washita River as depicted in Harper&#39;s Weekly for December 19, 1868, three weeks after the event on November 27. Through Wikimedia Commons.</p></div>
<p>Dealing with this dispute was a big learning experience.  Given my lifetime of socialization in 20th &amp; 21st century U.S.A., my first reaction in dealing with a clearly biased &#8220;one side of the story&#8221; breaker of rules was to look for an authority figure to whom I could appeal to bring this editor into line: <em>Someone is breaking the law: where are the cops, the judges, can&#8217;t we ban this guy?</em></p>
<p>The closest thing you have to &#8220;authority figures&#8221; on Wikipedia are admins&#8230; but it doesn&#8217;t take long on Wikipedia to discover that an admin is not, in fact, a cop.  Wikipedia governs itself by processes of consensus: if you appeal to an admin about a dispute on an article, the admin isn&#8217;t going to automatically kick someone&#8217;s butt unless there are clearcut problems like edit-warring or personal attacks.  But if the disputes are over content &amp; bias, the admin is going to advise you to discuss the problem on the article&#8217;s discussion page, &amp; try to come to a <strong><a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:CONS">consensus</a></strong>.  Yes, there we go: consensus, one of Wikipedia&#8217;s six core policies regarding personal conduct, which also include a demand for<a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Civility"> civility</a> and <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:No_personal_attacks">no personal attacks</a>, refraining from<a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Edit_warring"> edit warring</a>, welcoming <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Editing_policy">everyone to edit</a> (assuming they abide by Wikipedia&#8217;s core policies, including the conduct policies), &amp; <a title="Wikipedia:Ownership of articles" href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Ownership_of_articles">collaboration on, rather than individual &#8220;ownership&#8221; of, articles</a>.</p>
<p>Okay, but we&#8217;ve got a content dispute with a biased editor here, &amp; we&#8217;ve been told to take our dispute to the article&#8217;s talk page &amp; come to consensus.  But what if agreement can&#8217;t be reached there?  Then there are <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:CONS#Consensus-building">additional processes</a> used in Wikipedia through which disputes can be worked through, some of which might result in sanctions against problematic &#8220;I refuse to abide by Wikipedia&#8217;s policies&#8221; type editors (like the guy we were dealing with).  Our problem guy did get the occasional sanction for edit warring &amp; personal attacks (as did one of the folks supposedly on the &#8220;right side&#8221; of the content dispute, who has since gone on to a long career in getting banned for incivility &amp; edit warring under a variety of different <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Sock_puppetry">sockpuppet</a> usernames), but it took us a long time to bring the content dispute into some kind of control, just a couple of months before NaNoWriMo 2007 took me out of the Wikipedia biz.</p>
<p>If you&#8217;re curious, check out the <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Battle_of_Washita_River">Talk page &amp; its archives for Battle of Washita River</a> to see all the crap I &amp; my fellow editors had to go through.  Especially see the <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Battle_of_Washita_River/Archive_3#Request_for_comment">RfC (Request for Coments) on the article itself</a> &amp; the related RfCs on our two problem editors.  (I&#8217;m the user Yksin.)  It took us two months to move from the article being locked down in a biased &amp; inaccurate form to be able to edit it again after the disputes had been more-or-less settled.  It took a long time, but we did it right.  If you think I&#8217;m being a naive idealist when I talk about the need to be civil in discussing Sarah Palin, then read through this stuff, &amp; try to convince me that civil, factual discussion doesn&#8217;t, in the end, win out over the kind of offal that our problem editors were continually unloading on us.  Patience helps.  I&#8217;m proud of the way I handled myself throughout.</p>
<p>Wikipedia was a great experiential education for me in at least some of the possibilities of consensus.  It was also instructive about how &#8220;knowledge&#8221; is constructed.  I grew to have a great deal of respect for Wikipedia as a source of information — as long as you know how it works &amp; how to evaluate the information there.  (I typically look not only at the articles themselves, but also their edit histories &amp; talk pages.  But I also never consider a Wikipedia page the last word on a topic.  I still sometimes log in &amp; correct typos or misstatements of fact, or to revert vandalism.)</p>
<p>If you&#8217;re interested in seeing how consensus operates in a huge collaborative project like this, you can do like I had to do: go into the behind-the-scenes of Wikipedia. See how editors &amp; admins &amp; bureaucrats (another level of Wikipedia adminship) talk with each other about articles &amp; the processes by which articles are written.  Look at article talk pages &amp; see how disputes over content are resolves.  Check out the process called <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Requests_for_adminship">Request for Adminship, or RfA</a> by which admins become admins &amp; bureaucrats become bureaucrats — which is partially what <em>Cold</em>&#8216;s process of Examination is based upon.  There&#8217;s a lot there.   And it&#8217;s very geeky but also very cool.  I still think very highly of the numerous people who work really hard to make Wikipedia a good encyclopedia.</p>
<h2><span style="color: #008000;">A constitution on Mars</span></h2>
<div class="wp-caption alignright" style="width: 282px"><a href="http://photojournal.jpl.nasa.gov/catalog/PIA05243"><img title="Pavonis Mons" src="http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2771/4345492670_1cb1bfd230.jpg" alt="Pavonis Mons" width="272" height="500" /></a><p class="wp-caption-text">Mars Global Surveyor image of Pavonis Mons, a broad shield volcano (similar to the volcanoes of Hawaii) located on the martian equator at 113°W. The volcano summit is near 14 km (~8.7 mi) above the martian datum (0 elevation); the central caldera (crater near center of image) is about 45 km (~28 mi.) across and about 4.5 km (~2.8 mi.) deep. Pavonis Mons is the site of a settlement in Kim Stanley Robinson&#39;s novel Blue Mars where the Martian Constitution was written. Image credit: NASA/JPL/Malin Space Science Systems via JPL Photojournal. </p></div>
<p>At the same time in 2007 that I got caught up in Wikipedia editing, I was following my friend Chris&#8217; advice to read Kim Stanley Robinson&#8217;s Hugo &amp; Nebula-award winning Mars trilogy — <em>Red Mars</em>, <em>Green Mars</em>, &amp; <em>Blue Mars</em> — because of one of its overall themes, the terraformation of Mars.  But, <a href="http://www.henkimaa.com/2010/02/06/good-for-my-worldbuilding-bad-for-my-world/">as I wrote the other day</a>, I also discovered another them theme —</p>
<blockquote><p><span style="color: #008000;">the long &amp; arduous struggle of Robinson’s Martian colonists for freedom from the political &amp; economic domination of Earth. Freedom not only from Earth’s numerous governments — but especially from Earth’s corporations, which have become so powerful that they are in many ways more powerful than governments themselves, both on Earth &amp; on Mars.</span></p></blockquote>
<p>The <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kim_Stanley_Robinson">Wikipedia article about Kim Stanley Robinson</a> observes,</p>
<blockquote><p><span style="color: #993300;">Robinson&#8217;s work often explores alternatives to modern capitalism. In the <em>Mars</em> trilogy, it is argued that capitalism is an outgrowth of feudalism, which could be replaced in the future by a more democratic economic system. Worker ownership and cooperatives<em> Green Mars</em> and <em>Blue Mars</em> as a replacement for traditional corporations&#8230;.<br />
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<p><span style="color: #993300;">Robinson&#8217;s work often portrays characters struggling to preserve and enhance the world around them in an environment characterized by individualism and entrepreneurialism, often facing the political and economic authoritarianism of corporate power acting within this environment. Robinson has been described as anti-capitalist, and his work often portrays a form of frontier capitalism that promotes ideals that closely resemble anarcho-syndicalist and socialist systems, and faced with a capitalism that is staunched by entrenched hegemonic corporations. In particular, his Martian Constitution draws upon social democratic ideals explicitly emphasizing a community-participation element in political and economic life, while a persistent threat to social democracy is embodied by transnational corporations, the characteristics of which resemble those predicted by institutionalist and socialist economists such as Ted Wheelwright and Karl Marx.</span></p></blockquote>
<p>It should be no surprise to anyone, given my already <a href="http://www.henkimaa.com/2010/01/22/government-by-psychopathy/">vociferous criticism of contemporary corporatism</a> (not to mention the foolishness of granting corporations the legal fiction of &#8220;personhood&#8221;)  that I like this about Kim Stanley Robinson.  A lot.</p>
<p>Wikipedia goes on to say,</p>
<blockquote><p><span style="color: #993300;">The environmental, economic, and social themes in Robinson&#8217;s oeuvre stand in marked contrast to the right-wing Libertarian streak prevalent in much of science fiction&#8230;  and his work has been called the most successful attempt to reach a mass audience with a left-wing libertarian and anti-capitalist utopian vision since Ursula K. Le Guin&#8217;s 1974 novel, <em>The Dispossessed</em>.</span></p></blockquote>
<p><a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ursula_K._Le_Guin">Ursula K</a>!!!  What greater recommend could there be for Kim Stanley Robinson than that?  And <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Dispossessed"><em>The Disposessed</em></a> is a great novel — thanks, Wiki editors, for the reminder to read it again. If all I am at the moment is a barely-published writer of only a couple of things here &amp; there, still, let it be known — I aspire to stand in their tradition.</p>
<p>(Though I hesitate to call either of their visions as <em>utopian</em>.  I think societies such as they&#8217;ve invented are possible &amp; desirable.  But it&#8217;ll take us to make them.)</p>
<p>By the beginning of the last book of Robinson&#8217;s trilogy, <em>Blue Mars</em>, the Martian colonists have finally succeeded in kicking the corporations off-planet (by means of the trilogy&#8217;s <a href="http://kimstanleyrobinson.info/w/index.php5?title=Second_Martian_Revolution">Second Martian Revolution</a> in the year 2127); but in order to maintain their independence from Earth governments &amp; Earth-based corporations, they decide they need to adopt their own constitution &amp; government.  Thus, a <a href="http://kimstanleyrobinson.info/w/index.php5?title=Pavonis_Mons_Congress">congress</a> is convened in a settlement at Pavonis Mons — one of Mars&#8217; great volcanoes — where the new <a href="http://kimstanleyrobinson.info/w/index.php5?title=Martian_constitution">Martian Constitution</a> is drafted, later to be ratifiied by 78% of Martians who voted (the novel says that 95% of eligible voters voted).  (Tip o&#8217; the nib to <a href="http://kimstanleyrobinson.info/w/index.php5?title=Main_Page">MangalaWiki</a>, a wiki-based encyclopedia on the Robinson&#8217;s works, which helped me keep my facts on track.)</p>
<p>Here&#8217;s where Robinson &amp; Wikipedia collided in my storymind: the people who did the actual drafting of the constitution at Pavonis Mons worked collaboratively — &amp;, of course, using computers. —</p>
<blockquote><p><span style="color: #993300;">&#8220;At least the points are there to discuss,&#8221; Nadia said.  And along with them, on everyone&#8217;s screen, were the blank constitutions with their sections headings, suggesting all by themselves the many problems they were going to have to come to grips with: &#8220;Structure of Government, Executive; Structure of Government, Legislative; Structure of Government, Judicial; Rights of Citizens; Military and Police&#8230; [and so on].</span> <span style="color: #008000;">(my paperback copy of <em>Blue Mars</em>, p. 125)</span></p></blockquote>
<p>Later, after they complete their work, they attach all the numerous written documents &amp; discussions that had been generated during the process for reference by courts, historians, &amp; other interpreters who wanted a better understanding of the framers&#8217; intent.  (Much as Alaskans can refer to the <a href="http://www.law.state.ak.us/doclibrary/cc_minutes.html">minutes of the Alaska Constitutional Convention</a> in order to better understand the <a href="http://ltgov.state.ak.us/services/constitution.php">Alaska Constitution</a> &amp; its framers&#8217; intent.)</p>
<p>And I thought, what if they actually used <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wiki">wiki-type software</a>, similar to what Wikipedia itself uses,  to draft their constitution?  That way, there would always be a running record of the proceedings (at least, any that were in written form) — edit histories, talk pages to discuss differences &amp; disagreements about difference, &amp; to develop agreement &amp; consensus — the full gamut.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m not sure exactly the moment this stuff germinated to such an extent that it fledged itself fully into my story&#8217;s Consensus government — but I had it by November 1, 2007, when I did my first day&#8217;s writing on <em>Cold</em> — the same writing that became, with not as many revisions as you&#8217;d think, the short story <a href="http://crossedgenres.com/archives/012/cold-by-melissa-s-green/">&#8220;Cold&#8221;</a> published in <em>Crossed Genres</em> Issue #12 exactly two years later.</p>
<p>But come to think of it — there was also a third influence in the mix, which I&#8217;ll call —</p>
<h2><span style="color: #008000;">Influence of the Self</span></h2>
<p>— the Self in this case being <em>myself</em> &amp; my beliefs, especially the content of my beliefs with regard to selfhood.</p>
<p>Best expressed by some of my writing about halfway into NaNoWriMo 2007, when I was reading Robinson&#8217;s <em>The Martians</em>, which collects a lot of stories &amp; sketches related to his trilogy &amp; its characters.  Among them were some pieces about the Constitution of Mars, with commentary from one of Robinson&#8217;s fictional constitutional framers. These pieces led me to additional thinking about Consensus in my story.  On November 19, 2007, I wrote in part,</p>
<blockquote><p><span style="color: #008000;">Two chief principles exist in dialectic, as can be encapsulated in the statement held to by one of the spiritual movements within Consensus: <em>Harming none, do as you will</em>.  I think what I&#8217;m getting to is some of my own deepseated beliefs, which that statement plays a large part in.  Basically, whether at the individual level or the community and government level, the  <strong>principle of sovereignty over one&#8217;s own actions</strong> (&#8220;do as you will&#8221;, self-government) is always balanced against the the <strong>principle of nonharm</strong>: the recognition and respecting of the rights and autonomy of others.   Consensus has as one of its fundamental principles, which is legal, moral, and spiritual all at once, that the integrity of the Self is paramount, whether that Self be an individual or a body of individuals joined together into a family, a community, or a large body of society.  Violation of such integrity or wholeness through the causing of harm is conceived of, legally, as crime; morally and spiritually, it may be considered sin.  The principle is established in the very name of this type of government: Consensus, indicating the consent of those who make it up.  Government, rather than being something imposed, often coercively, upon the people by a hierarchy above them, is made up of all of the people in a very direct way.<br />
</span></p></blockquote>
<p>Later that same day —</p>
<blockquote><p><span style="color: #008000;">There is no such thing, in Consensus philosophy and culture, as a government separate from the people.  Everything begins with the Self, the first Self that is each individual human being.  Inasmuch as humans as biological beings are also social beings, Self is also expressed in the yearning for Other, which finds a home in relationship, each relationship or group of relationships themselves forming their own Selves: friendship, sexual pairing and partnership, family, community, Consensus.  Because all levels of society begin with that fundamental Self of each individual, therefore the Self is sacrosanct; its autonomy is the first building block of society.  To violate the Selfhood of an individual is like the breaking open an atom: it&#8217;s the beginning of destruction.  The Self, of course, is much more fragile than the atom: it took until the 20th century C.E. for humans to learn how to split the atom; but it didn&#8217;t take us long at all to come up with all manner of ways to cleave the human soul, and the chain reaction from that has never ended.  Only some have learned to restore it, only some have learned ways of living with one another in such ways that the violation of soul and Self isn&#8217;t inextricably a part of human education, of human &#8220;conditioning.&#8221;  Even the most intelligent and soul-preserving societies make mistakes.</span></p>
<p><span style="color: #008000;"><strong>Consensus begins by recognizing those two aspects of what it is to be human: Self, and Other, in which each Other is also a Self.</strong> Society, culture, government is nothing more and nothing less than the provisional solution humans have come to in any given time and place to balance between Self and Other; or shall we say, the multiplicity of Selves, each with its own sacrosanct Integrity.  Thus, the laws of Consensus begin with the laws intended to protect the Self at its most basic level, that of the individual.  Everything else flows upward from that.</span></p></blockquote>
<p>And now here I am reading more about consensus &amp; related ideas — <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Collaborative">collaborative decisionmaking</a>, <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Collective_intelligence">collective intelligence</a>, <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sociocracy">sociocracy </a>— all of which reflect the ethic that I was writing about: the idea that every individual has value, &amp; that the integrity &amp; selfhood of every individual must be protected.</p>
<p>But the books I&#8217;m reading are taking me even one step beyond that: recognition that <strong>each &amp; every individual, without exception, must have a say in any decision that affects her or his life</strong>. Government not through the coercion of the powerful over the less-powerful, but government by the consent of all.</p>
<p>Not only are these books helping me to articulate this, but they&#8217;re also teaching me the techniques &amp; strategies that can make it possible.  Both in my stories, &amp; in the Real World of which we all are part.</p>
<p>Needless to say, I&#8217;ll be writing more about this.</p>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div class="wp-caption alignnone" style="width: 510px"><a href="http://photojournal.jpl.nasa.gov/catalog/pia04304"><img title="Mars" src="http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2691/4304198747_7b4fe48a26.jpg" alt="Mars" width="500" height="474" /></a><p class="wp-caption-text">Mars mosaic from a compilation of images captured by Viking Orbiter 1. At center is the entire Valles Marineris canyon system, over 3,000 km long and up to 8 km deep. To the left are a volcanoes of the Tharsis bulge — Ascraeus Mons to the north, Pavonis Mons in the middle, &amp; Arsia Mons in the shadow. Photo credit: NASA/USGS (via JPL Photojournal)</p></div>
<p><a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Worldbuilding">Worldbuilding</a>, Wikipedia helpfully tells us, is</p>
<blockquote><p><span style="color: #993300;">the process of constructing an imaginary world, sometimes associated with a fictional universe.</span></p></blockquote>
<p>The Wikipedia article focuses on the creation of worlds &amp; the cultures that live in them by writers of science fiction &amp; fantasy — for instance, Tolkien&#8217;s Middle-Earth in <em>The Hobbit</em> and <em>The Lord of The Rings</em> trilogy, or the planet Cyteen in C.J. Cherryh&#8217;s novels <em>Cyteen</em> and <em>Regenesis</em>, to name but a couple of my favorite imaginary worlds.</p>
<p>But to my mind, <em>worldbuilding</em> isn&#8217;t restricted only to completely <em>imagined</em> worlds &amp; people — really, any writer of fiction engages in worldbuilding, even when writing the most mainstream fiction that takes place in a world looking &#8220;just like&#8221; the world you &amp; I live in, because <em>any</em> fiction involves presenting the particular world(s) &amp; worldview(s) of the characters that inhabit it.</p>
<p>As if you &amp; I actually lived in the same world.  Because isn&#8217;t your worldview, no matter who you are,  so much different than mine?  Yet there are some things we can agree on, at least most of us can — if only that rocks are hard to the touch, &amp; water is wet.  <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Consensus_reality">Consensual reality</a>, it&#8217;s called.  And that&#8217;s the point, at least in these coupla paragraphs of this blog post: there are some things a writer can generally assume her audience is familiar with, so that she doesn&#8217;t have to explain them; but other things that exist outside your normal frame of reference &#8212; that she has invented &#8212; yeah, of course she&#8217;ll need to explain.  (Or show. As that familiar writer&#8217;s proverb goes, <em>show don&#8217;t tell</em> — though, as with all rules, there are exceptions.)  Mainstream fiction, so-called, differs from science fiction &amp; fantasy mainly in how closely it adheres to consensual reality, how much worldbuilding it has to do.</p>
<p>I could go on a lot longer about my thoughts about the different types of worldbuilding in different types of fiction (or, arguably, nonfiction), but then I&#8217;d never get to the point of this post — which is <em>my</em> worldbuilding, &amp; how the recent decision by the U.S. Supreme Court decision in<em> Citizens United v. FEC</em> — along with everything else in U.S. &amp; international law &amp; custom that grants undue influence in how our governments &amp; economies &amp; lives are run to the fake persons known as <em>corporations</em> —  is really really really good for my worldbuilding.</p>
<p>But really really really sucko for the world I actually live in.</p>
<h2><span style="color: #008000;">Good for my worldbuilding</span></h2>
<div class="wp-caption alignright" style="width: 270px"><a href="http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:MarsTransitionV.jpg"><img title="Mars in process of terraformation" src="http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2757/4325887964_cc81951146_b.jpg" alt="Artist's conception of Mars in process of terraformation from Wikimedia Commons. " width="260" height="1024" /></a><p class="wp-caption-text">Artist&#39;s conception of Mars in process of terraformation from Wikimedia Commons. Used in accordance with GNU Free Documentation License, Version 1.2.</p></div>
<p>In early 2007 I decided that to jumpstart my writing after &#8220;life,&#8221; as usual, had decided to interfere with it, I was going to do National Novel Writing Month that November.  The good people of NaNoWriMo itself suggest that it&#8217;s best not to do NaNoWriMo with a project one already has underway — which in my case would have been <em>Mistress of Woodland</em> — so I pulled an <a href="http://www.henkimaa.com/2007/09/28/nanowrimo-2007-what-im-gonna-write-how-im-gonna-write-it/">idea</a> off the backburner of my mind &amp; decided to work on a new project,  <em>Cold</em>, which <a href="http://www.henkimaa.com/2007/10/01/about-cold/">would be about</a> two young women on a planet in the late stages of <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Terraforming">terraformation</a>.</p>
<p>I told my friend Chris about it, &amp; he told me I should read Kim Stanley Robinson&#8217;s <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mars_trilogy">Mars trilogy</a> — <em>Red Mars</em>, <em>Green Mars</em>, <em>Blue Mars</em>.  My brother Dave had previously recommended those books to me too.  So, over the late winter &amp; spring of 2007, I read them.</p>
<p>Good call, guys.</p>
<p>If I were to summarize the story of Robinson&#8217;s trilogy in one sentence, I&#8217;d say, <em>It&#8217;s a science fiction story about terraforming Mars</em>.  Hence <em>Red Mars</em> — what the colonizers of the planet find when they get there; <em>Green Mars</em> — how it becomes green with growing plants; <em>Blue Mars</em> — how it becomes a second blue marble in the sky, like our own Earth, rich with liquid water on its surface &amp; in its atmosphere.</p>
<p>But really, that&#8217;s only one theme of the trilogy.  There&#8217;s also an ecological theme: is it right &amp; ethical for us, humans from planet Earth, to remake another planet — even a presumably &#8220;dead&#8221; planet like Mars — into a second Earth?  And meanwhile, what&#8217;s happening environmentally on the <em>real</em> Earth? — climate change, global warming, melting of Antarctica, rising seas, continuing overpopulation &amp; pollution&#8230; in short, planetwrecking, at least in terms of keeping it habitable for human beings &amp; numerous of our fellow species.</p>
<p>There&#8217;s also a third dominant theme: the long &amp; arduous struggle of Robinson&#8217;s Martian colonists for freedom from the political &amp; economic domination of Earth. Freedom not only from Earth&#8217;s numerous governments — but especially from Earth&#8217;s corporations, which have become so powerful that they are in many ways more powerful than governments themselves, both on Earth &amp; on Mars.</p>
<p>Sound familiar?</p>
<p>Robinson isn&#8217;t, of course, the first SF writer to extrapolate from the scary situation we&#8217;re already in today vis-à-vis corporate power into some even scarier futures, with megacorporations having for all intents &amp; purposes replaced any semblance of government of, by, &amp; for the people.  (Unless, of course, you persist in perversely insisting that corporations are <em>people</em>, like the U.S. Supreme Court does.)  The science fiction subgenre called <em><a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cyberpunk">cyberpunk</a></em> comes particularly to mind.</p>
<p>My imagined science fiction future is already extrapolated from the present, &amp; the power corporations have is part of that.  During NaNoWriMo 2007, for <em>Cold</em>, I started inventing a government called, simply, Consensus, which really <em>is</em> a government of, by, &amp; for the people, but it was during NaNoWriMo 2009, for <em>Long Dark</em>, that I discovered how Consensus came into existence.  I was writing stuff in the same story universe as <em>Cold</em>, but about three centuries earlier in the timeline; there, it became more apparent that the Consensus government came out of particular (invented) historical circumstances: namely, a rebellion by people living &amp; working in the Asteroid Belt &amp; outer solar system against the tyranny &amp; exploitation of corporations, which, as usual, cared more about the corporate bottom line than about the welfare of their workers &amp; their workers&#8217; families.</p>
<p>So you see, that&#8217;s what&#8217;s so great about the <em>Citizens United</em> decision, &amp; other corporate-power related phenomena. Here&#8217;s another word for you: <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Verisimilitude_%28literature%29"><em>verisimilitude</em></a>:  the appearance of being true or real. The more our public officials hand over the reins of government to corporations, the more plausible the story world I&#8217;ve built becomes.  Wow, thank you Supreme Court!</p>
<p>Except, uh&#8230; like I said.  This shit is —</p>
<h2><span style="color: #008000;">Bad for my world</span></h2>
<p>No, corporations aren&#8217;t the only things — er, I mean &#8220;people&#8221; — whose greed, thoughtlessness, short-sightedness, stupidity, self-aggrandizement, etc. etc., are bad for the world.  They&#8217;re just on the current cutting edge of it.  And the more we, or public officials supposedly acting in our name, hand political power to them, the more deeply cutting their edge is.  The <em>Citizens United</em> ruling is just another step in that direction.</p>
<p>And nice as verisimilitude in fiction is, what would be even nicer would be to live in a world in which, for instance, we could trust that our elected officials were really responsible to us, instead of to corporations whose paid propaganda (so called &#8220;free speech&#8221;) put them in office.</p>
<p>In May 2007, when I was an active Wikipedia editor, I spent lots of time researching the career of <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tom_Anderson_%28politician%29">Tom Anderson</a> — in fact, I wrote most of  the article about him in Wikipedia. Alaskans will recognize Tom Anderson as the first of our former legislators to be tried and convicted in the federal probe into political corruption in Alaska.  I wrote the article in my typically geeky, super-detail-oriented style, with lots &amp; lots of cites&#8230; &amp; it took a lot of energy &amp; effort.  It&#8217;s certainly a lot more detailed article than you&#8217;re typically going to find in Wikipedia on a two-term state legislator, corrupt or not.</p>
<p>But for me it was well worth it, because compiling that biography, based solely on the written record (mostly articles from the <em>Anchorage Daily News</em> and the <em>Juneau Empire</em>) really brought home the lesson:<strong> whenever you bring corporate money into contact with public elections &amp; officials, there are inherent conflicts of interest for those public officials which will erode their ability to serve the people who elect them.</strong> Sometimes, a public official will be so bollixed up by the conflict that they won&#8217;t even recognize it.  Tom Anderson&#8217;s case is particularly illustrative.</p>
<p>For example, consider this instance from Anderson&#8217;s career, involving his relationship to Northeast Community Council, the council for the same part of Anchorage that Anderson himself was elected to represent in the Alaska House of Representatives.  (Note that I&#8217;ve removed the citations contained in the article for ease of reading; <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tom_Anderson_%28politician%29">see the article</a> for citations.) —</p>
<blockquote><p><span style="color: #008000;">Anderson played a significant role over two years from 2002 to 2004 in changing the composition of Anchorage&#8217;s Northeast Community Council to reflect more conservative political and economic views. Anderson encouraged friends and allies, including pastors and members of the locally influential Anchorage Baptist Temple, to pack the town meeting-style community council elections. By May 2004, six of the nine community council board members, including its president, were friends and political allies of Anderson. While Anchorage&#8217;s community councils have no real authority, they are influential with the Anchorage Assembly because, according to Dick Traini, then chair of the Anchorage Assembly, &#8220;they are the active people in the community that choose to be involved.&#8221; Community council involvement has been a first step in the political careers of several Alaska politicians.</span></p>
<p><span style="color: #008000;">In July 2004, Anderson was criticized in an <em>Anchorage Daily News</em> editorial for signing a $10,000 contract in 2003 with the Alaska oilfield services company VECO Corporation to consult &#8220;on local government and community council affairs.&#8221; Anderson had earlier told the <em>Anchorage Daily News</em> that he&#8217;d been approached by VECO after the end of the 2003 legislative session because it was aware he&#8217;d done similar consulting work before he became a legislator. He told the newspaper that most of his work for VECO was in seeking out civic and charitable events for the company to get involved in, and that he also monitored Anchorage&#8217;s community councils to see if there were zoning cases or other issues under discussion that might affect VECO. The newspaper noted that Anderson had received about $4,000 in campaign contributions from VECO employees or their spouses in the 2002 election that won him his first term in the Alaska House. By July 2004 he had received at least $3,500 in VECO-related contributions for his 2004 reelection bid. </span></p>
<p><span style="color: #008000;">Members of the community council later recalled Anderson attending all their meetings during 2003, and assumed he was attending as their representative in the state legislature. They did not learn he was there as a consultant for VECO until 2004, when his state financial disclosure form was filed with the Alaska Public Offices Commission, as required by law.</span></p>
<p><span style="color: #008000;">By the April 2006 election for Northeast Community Council, the effects of the 2004 takeover had been partially reversed, leaving the council nearly half and half liberal and conservative.</span></p></blockquote>
<p>Indeed, who was Anderson representing when he attended community council meetings — his constituents in the Muldoon area of Anchorage (including my brother&#8217;s family)? or VECO, which was not only lining his pockets as a supposed &#8220;political consultant,&#8221; but also helped fund his election in the first place?  (Some folks might also have interest in the connection between Anderson &amp; Jerry Prevo&#8217;s megachurch the Anchorage Baptist Temple.)</p>
<p>Here&#8217;s another instance, from a couple years later —</p>
<blockquote><p><span style="color: #008000;">In July [2006] Anderson was hired by the Anchorage Home Builders Association for $2,500 per month. The following month he testified before the Anchorage Assembly in favor of two stores that Wal-Mart wanted to build in his legislative district. The Northeast Community Council opposed the stores. At the Assembly meeting, Assembly chair Dan Sullivan introduced Anderson as &#8220;Representative Anderson,&#8221; but Anderson corrected him, stating that he was at the meeting in representation of the home builders association, which favored the Wal-Mart stores.</span></p></blockquote>
<p>Again, who was Anderson representing?  His legislative constituency?  Or the home builders association &amp; Wal-Mart?  Obviously, he believed all that was necessary to keep himself in the clear, ethically, was to take off his &#8220;Representative&#8221; hat &amp; put on his &#8220;paid consultant&#8221; hat, &amp; magically the two roles would be kept completely separate.  Right.  Based upon the law as written, Anderson was not acting illegally.  But the presence of conflict of interest is obvious — however oblivious he himself was to it.</p>
<p>Anderson was ultimately convicted of seven counts involving extortion, bribery, conspiracy, and money laundering after taking $26,000 worth of bribes funneled by Anchorage lobbyist Bill Bobrick through a sham corporation that Anderson was supposedly &#8220;consulting&#8221; for.  The scheme was supposed to be for the benefit of a private prison company, Cornell, which was reportedly unaware of any of this; one of its employees, Frank Prewitt, was funneling the money as a confidential informant for the FBI.</p>
<p>I ran out of steam to write more detailed coverage on Anderson&#8217;s trial &amp; its aftermath, but I remember quite well that his obliviousness to his ethical lapses extended into his public statements about his conviction.  He still (or so he claimed) believed he&#8217;d done nothing wrong.  Other former lawmakers convicted out of the same federal corruption investigation seemed similarly oblivious.  Vic Kohring, Ted Stevens (who in my opinion is guilty even if his conviction was set aside because of prosecutorial misconduct) — all of them claim <em>I did nothing wrong</em> — even Pete Kott still claims this in spite of being <span style="text-decoration: underline;">caught on camera</span> taking a bribe.  <em>I did nothing wrong</em>.  They take it as a given that it&#8217;s okay to take money, gifts, not to mention campaign donations, which will now be supplemented by unlimited campaign advertising from corporations so long as the corporations like them.</p>
<p>A lot of members of the public take all this as a given too.  A lot of the public is going right along with the <em>Citizens United</em> decision, stating it as a great victory for &#8220;free speech.&#8221;  Uh, s&#8217;cuse me &#8212; don&#8217;t you mean paid-for-with-megabucks speech?</p>
<p>Why do they take it as a given?  Name your own theory, but here&#8217;s mine:</p>
<p>Most of us have become desensitized.  We&#8217;ve grown so accustomed to the power of corporate money in every aspect of our lives that we take it for granted.  It&#8217;s the famous <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Boiling_frog">&#8220;boiling frog&#8221;</a> thing all over again.  Over the span of many years — more than a century, now — as our lawmakers &amp; law interpreters (the courts) progressively hand more &amp; more power over to corporations —</p>
<ul>
<li>corporate &#8220;personhood&#8221;</li>
<li>privatization of government functions — e.g., prison privatization, use of  corporate private armies (mercenaries) like Xe (formerly Blackwater), etc.</li>
<li>deregulation</li>
<li>granting corporations &#8220;ownership&#8221; over segments of nature, like water, genes, microorganisms, etc.</li>
<li>unlimited corporate &#8220;free speech&#8221;</li>
<li>etc.</li>
</ul>
<p>— we&#8217;re gradually, just like that frog, having the heat on us slowly turned up higher &amp; higher &amp; higher.</p>
<p>Okay, so the <em>Citizens United</em> case was a bit more widely noticed.  See how many people are looking around and asking, <em>Whoa&#8230; how&#8217;d we get <span style="text-decoration: underline;">here</span>? This is <span style="text-decoration: underline;">fucked up</span>.</em></p>
<p>Most of us do know that something is wrong, but we can&#8217;t seem to agree what the problems are, &amp; therefore their solutions.  And thanks to the power our government has handed over to corporations, they are free to use their &#8220;free speech&#8221; (that is, their money) to influence &amp; distort our perceptions about what the problem is.  So we continue to point our fingers at the wrong causes,  propose the wrong solutions, fight about it all — &amp; the heat keeps turning up, &amp; corporations continue to enrich themselves at our expense, &amp; accountable honest government slips ever further out of our hands.</p>
<p><strong>Big Government (the kind the Tea Party folks don&#8217;t like) &amp; Big Corporations are just two different faces of the same phenomenon: the fading away of democracy.  The replacement of <em>government of, by, and for the people</em> with government of, by, and for the powerful few in order to control &amp; exploit all the rest of us.</strong></p>
<p><em>You </em>know what I&#8217;m saying — <a href="http://www.henkimaa.com/2010/01/22/government-by-psychopathy/">that psychopathy thing I talked about a couple of weeks ago</a> with reference to corporations.   But y&#8217;know, psychopathic Big Government like, say Nazi Germany or the Soviet Union under Stalin, or a theocracy like those which Christianists are aiming for — in which anyone who doesn&#8217;t agree to toe the line of whatever arbitrary set of rules established by whatever arbitrary set of preachers or priests who claim to hold the blueprints of the heavens of some arbitrary bully-god — none of that crap is exactly desirable either.</p>
<p>What <span style="text-decoration: underline;">is</span> desirable?  Real democracy, of course.  Real government<em> of, by, and for the people<em>.</em></em> Government in which <em>every</em> stakeholder has a say and <em>every</em> stakeholder&#8217;s rights are protected and honored. <em>Every stakeholder</em> means every single person (<em>real</em> persons, that is, not fake &#8220;corporate persons&#8221;) who has any stake at all in how we operate our society.  Which is to say: every. single. one. of. us.</p>
<p>That&#8217;s not how the U.S. government was set to operate, unfortunately.  Our Founding Fathers did their best according to their own lights, I suppose, but they left a lot of stakeholders out of the loop.  Women.  Slaves.  Children.  Etc. Some of these oversights have been partially corrected through constitutional amendments, but the fact remains that <em>real</em> franchise — real ability to have a say in how society operates, &amp; to have one&#8217;s own rights to <em>life, liberty, &amp; the pursuit of happiness</em> — is still heavily restricted according to various kinds of status.  Most of us still live under other people&#8217;s thumbs in one way or another.  Some people win.  Some people lose: their jobs, their homes, their families, their lives.</p>
<p>It&#8217;s just the way of the world, you say.  But why?  Is there another choice?</p>
<h2><span style="color: #008000;">So here we are, back to worldbuilding</span></h2>
<p>How can a society that is based on &#8220;some people win, and so does everybody else&#8221; be built?</p>
<p>That&#8217;s in essence what I&#8217;m trying to do in inventing the government of which my characters are part in <em>Long Dark</em> &amp; <em>Cold</em>, which I named, simply, <em>Consensus</em>.</p>
<p>Notice that I said <em>the government of which my characters are part</em>.  Not, <em>by which my characters are governed</em>.  Because in <em>this</em> government, being a <em>part</em> of the government &amp; being <em>governed</em> by it are one &amp; the same thing.  Nobody is <em>not</em> a member of the government.  It truly is <em>of, by, for</em> the people.</p>
<p>Whoa, now, but wait a minute.  Isn&#8217;t that pretty damn unrealistic?  What about, y&#8217;know, that big word I used earlier?  <em>Verisimilitude</em>.</p>
<p>Well, that&#8217;s the thing.  I think it <em>is</em> realistic.  Not only that, but just as the corporate exploitation against which my characters&#8217; ancestors rebel can be easily extrapolated from the stuff we&#8217;re already living with in the world we live in here &amp; now, so can I extrapolate my society&#8217;s Consensus government from forms of governance that already exist &amp; are used successfully in the world we live in here &amp; now.  There are places, there are people, who are doing it now.</p>
<p>So nowadays I&#8217;m reading a lot about <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Consensus">consensus</a>, <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sociocracy">sociocracy</a>, <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Collective_intelligence">collective intelligence</a>, &amp; related ideas, on top of all the thinking &amp; writing about this stuff I did on the fly during NaNoWriMo 2007 &amp; 2009.  I&#8217;ll be writing more about this in other blog posts.</p>
<p>Meanwhile, may these ideas be the foundation of more worldbuilding in the here &amp; now of 2010 planet Earth. I see little hope for the old tried &amp; untrue methods of adversarial &amp; often antagonistic systems of governance that we&#8217;re more accustomed to.  Health care reform debate, anyone?</p>
<p>How very pretty &amp; hopeful our world looks out of the hostility &amp; namecalling between political rivals these days.  Not.</p>
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