Comments on: Goldilocks & the Three Bears: A Retelling

By: Sly Matthews

Sly Matthews — Sat, 05 Mar 2011 17:47:24 +0000

That was fun, it’s good to see the humor in your writing because so much of your writing lately has been by virtue of the subject, so not humorous. I wanted to tell you now because you know I would forget if I waited, that the way you described of picking the story you’re going to write seems like a good way for even non writers to give it a try. I’m telling little stories all of the time when I’m talking to people mostly in email where I don’t trip over my tongue so much. Not real writer calibre stories but you know, shrug, stories non-the-less.
(I’m so not sure about the commas I just put them where they feel right to me)

By: Mel Green

Mel Green — Fri, 04 Mar 2011 00:26:13 +0000

[grin] I see your point.

In a postmodern way, I guess. Sorta like how Jon Stewart & Stephen Colbert are “light” even though they’re talking about the same ugly political stuff that pushes all my despair buttons when I hear about it from mainstream media.

By: Camden Yehle

Camden Yehle — Thu, 03 Mar 2011 23:03:05 +0000

This is what passes for light now a days?

By: Mel

Mel — Thu, 10 Dec 2009 19:55:07 +0000

Thanks!

By: yo momma

yo momma — Thu, 10 Dec 2009 19:42:42 +0000

this is a verry good story…

By: Mel

Mel — Tue, 24 Nov 2009 00:04:22 +0000

I’m glad you enjoyed the story. I’m afraid I’m not familiar with any story about the three little bears.

By: autum

autum — Mon, 23 Nov 2009 23:33:22 +0000

i like this……mabey sometime could you make a story of the three little bears told by baby bear??? thank you